Examples of Edits

Examples of Edits

Here are some practical examples of edits I've made: the original sentence is in bold, with redundant text in red. The shorter sentence is in roman, with any added text in blue.

→ Charles Burdett

Why would I want to waste Charles Burdett's time? He is a busy man! He's also just had a new baby, so he has no time for verbosity.

Before:

I just wanted to say I am very much enjoying your newsletter.

After:

I'm very much enjoying your newsletter.

Before:

You've hopefully been getting new orders for the tactics.

After:

You've hopefully had new orders for the tactics.